The only thing I liked..
Was the awsome Newgrounds intro! But the actual movie sucked. Sorry, but it´s true.
The only thing I liked..
Was the awsome Newgrounds intro! But the actual movie sucked. Sorry, but it´s true.
Thanks. Put I'll fix it.
Impressing!
I´m very impressed. You said that you used two days on this? Pretty amazing. I didn´t make a Pico flash because I thought that I didn´t have much time to make it. In the middle of March. I´m just pretty impressed.. =P
Anyway.. Did you make the Pico and Uperkids sprites by yourself? I know that it isn´t imposible and stuff, but did you?
//Xipp
yes, I did these myself, actually the original sprites are from Double Dragon 1, but I drawed Billy as Pico.
I'm impressed too. Edit sprites, make the animation, get sounds and music! woah! I had homeworks and works between hours! I don't know wtf how I did this.....but I hope you enjoyed it. :D see ya...
Great!
I really liked this one! The graphics was just great, and the storyline is very original!
Keep it up!
//Xipp
Thankies :)
Listen..
I gave you a protection point because you got alot of potential. Just practice and you´ll get alot better. It isn´t easy to make great flashs like Animator VS. Animation and On Your Mark. You have to put effort into it.
The goods:
-You got a good style
The bads:
-The blood was pretty lame
-Everything happened so slow. Try to make it look like the ninja got a move every single second.
-The opponents didn´t move. They did just stand there. Make them fight and move around.
-I hated the background music. Use some better fight music from Newgrounds.
-The graphics wasn´t too good.
That´s all. Please don´t give up!
//Xipp
~Okay.. But why you say you have an good style and you have under your review style: 1?
Not bad!
Your flash is pretty good!
The goods:
-Good graphic
-Good lip sync
-Pretty funny
-Reminds me a little about some family comedies like Everybody Loves Raymond.
The bads:
-Their look wasn´t original or kind a special. Try to experiment with the characters look. You got alot of skills, so don´t waste your time with circle heads and stuff like that. ;) (It´s ment as a compliment!)
That´s all.
Keep up the good work!
//Xipp
Hey thanks!
Never been compared to everybody loves raymond before :S
Circle heads are just a bit of a tradition but maybe we will go for something better sometime yeah...
I´m sorry..
But I gave you a blam point.. You have to work harder on your submitions. You didn´t use many animations, but only motiontweens..
The goods:
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The bads:
-No animations (Practice at fx. FbF or sprite animation. You can get some good sprites from theshyguykingdom an thespritersrecource. You can get sounds from mfgg.net)
-Only motiontweens (Try not to use motiontween so much)
-Pointless (Make a storyboard/storyline)
-Poor drawings (Practice. There´s some great art/animation tutorials here on NG)
Try to improve these things, and then submiting a flash again.
//Xipp
I'm sorry, but you lost a protection point. <3
Great job!
This flash is really amazing! It´s very good that you got voiceactors for this one. Can´t wait for part 4.
Keep it up!
//Xipp
Im happy to hear!
Very good!
I realy liked your flash! The idea is pretty original, and you made everything on Newgrounds very realistic!
Keep up the good work!
//Xipp
Happy to hear!
Watch out for Mario In Newgrounds III!
Out soon
To SHORT!
To make me vote 5, you have to make it longer! It were funny, and true =D, but you have to work more with it and stuff.
//Xipp
I'll surely make longer ones in the future... maybe.
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